Tuesday 27 November 2012

Pitch & Synopsis for Vampire movie.


Pitch:
A group of friends are sponsored to do a camping event. Once there, one by one they start to disappear, leaving Angel behind alone with the ghostly figure lurking in the distance.


Synopsis:
A group of young adults go camping in a jungle park just outside the city. During their 4 nights there, they start to disappear one by one during the first 2 nights.
This starts when Angel and Lori play fight and Angel accidently hits Lori in the face causing her nose to bleed. Angry, Lori goes away from the camp site to clean up but does not return. 
The rest of the group go to find her leaving Caroline and Jamie behind to take care of everyone's belongings. While looking for Lori, Angel spots a dark shadowy figure in the distance; she looks away when Connor calls her to tell her they found the Lori's water bottle and tissue roll covered in blood on the floor. When Angel comes to look back the distorted figure, it had disappeared. 
Returning to the camp site, worried, Caroline tells the group that Jamie went to find a spot that has signal. After an hour, he does not return. Convincing themselves that this is a joke, the group continue with what they were doing.
Realising that it’s been 4 hours since the disappearance of both Jamie and Lori, the group becomes scared and paranoid and start to accuse each other of being psychopaths. All hope for return to the city is also impossible as there is no signal to call the coach or anyone else to pick them up.
Meanwhile, Angels continues seeing the ghostly figure between the trees but doesn't mention anything to the group, in case they accuse her of being the ‘mysterious killer’.
However, as time goes on, they disappear one by one until Angel is the only one left. She zips herself into her tent, when she’s comes to pop head out to have a look around, her head hits a hard object, she looks up and see’s what appears to be a vampire looking back at her.

10 comments:

  1. This is really good little one; and it ca ACTUALLY been filmed for your piece.
    I cant wait to find out what the cliffhanger!

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  2. Would have been better if you didn't use your dad's idea. Develop some creativity woman! xoxoxo

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    1. THIS ISNT MY DAD'S IDEA. SHUTUP. I HATE YOU.

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  3. I REALLY LIKE THIS TOO. I LIKE THAT THERE IS A TYPICAL HORROR STORYLINE AND THERE IS A CLIFFHANGER.
    MY EBI IS THAT THERE ARE TOO MANY CHARACTERS FOR MY LITTLE HEAD BUT OTHERWISE I LIKE IT.
    B x x x x

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    1. WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING AT ME!?
      Kay thaaaaanks!
      xoxox

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  4. Really good Shedia! I like the typical horror storyline and the cliff hanger at the end! I would like to see this as a film!

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  5. very creative and detailed , i like the way you thought outside the box with the jungle park. When your reading the synopsis you can clearly see the scene (camera shots , lighting , atmosphere). i like the use of the cliff hanger . don't be frightened if i run up to you asking for the end of the scene ...haha well done xxxxxxx

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  6. Thaaaaaaaaaanks Ellie!
    I hope you're not being sarcastic! LOLOL
    xoxoxox

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