Pitch:
A group of friends are sponsored to do a camping event. Once
there, one by one they start to disappear, leaving Angel behind alone with the
ghostly figure lurking in the distance.
Synopsis:
A group of young adults go camping in a jungle park just outside the city. During their 4 nights there, they start to disappear one by one during the first 2 nights.
This starts when Angel and Lori play fight and Angel accidently
hits Lori in the face causing her nose to bleed. Angry, Lori goes away from the
camp site to clean up but does not return.
The rest of the
group go to find her leaving Caroline and Jamie behind to take care of
everyone's belongings. While looking for Lori, Angel spots a dark shadowy
figure in the distance; she looks away when Connor calls her to tell her they
found the Lori's water bottle and tissue roll covered in blood on the floor. When Angel
comes to look back the distorted figure, it had disappeared.
Returning to the camp site, worried, Caroline tells the group that
Jamie went to find a spot that has signal. After an hour, he does not return.
Convincing themselves that this is a joke, the group continue with what they were
doing.
Realising that it’s been 4 hours since the disappearance of both
Jamie and Lori, the group becomes scared and paranoid and start to accuse each other
of being psychopaths. All hope for return to the city is also impossible as
there is no signal to call the coach or anyone else to pick them up.
Meanwhile, Angels continues seeing the ghostly figure between the
trees but doesn't mention anything to the group, in case they accuse her of
being the ‘mysterious killer’.
However, as time goes on, they disappear one by one until Angel is
the only one left. She zips herself into her tent, when she’s comes to pop head
out to have a look around, her head hits a hard object, she looks up and see’s
what appears to be a vampire looking back at her.
This is really good little one; and it ca ACTUALLY been filmed for your piece.
ReplyDeleteI cant wait to find out what the cliffhanger!
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DeleteI know you're lying. i hate you.
Would have been better if you didn't use your dad's idea. Develop some creativity woman! xoxoxo
ReplyDeleteTHIS ISNT MY DAD'S IDEA. SHUTUP. I HATE YOU.
DeleteI REALLY LIKE THIS TOO. I LIKE THAT THERE IS A TYPICAL HORROR STORYLINE AND THERE IS A CLIFFHANGER.
ReplyDeleteMY EBI IS THAT THERE ARE TOO MANY CHARACTERS FOR MY LITTLE HEAD BUT OTHERWISE I LIKE IT.
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WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING AT ME!?
DeleteKay thaaaaanks!
xoxox
Really good Shedia! I like the typical horror storyline and the cliff hanger at the end! I would like to see this as a film!
ReplyDeleteDon't lie to me.
Deletevery creative and detailed , i like the way you thought outside the box with the jungle park. When your reading the synopsis you can clearly see the scene (camera shots , lighting , atmosphere). i like the use of the cliff hanger . don't be frightened if i run up to you asking for the end of the scene ...haha well done xxxxxxx
ReplyDeleteThaaaaaaaaaanks Ellie!
ReplyDeleteI hope you're not being sarcastic! LOLOL
xoxoxox